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Old 03-05-2012, 11:34 AM   #3
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topic: keeping animals in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for zoos to exist in the 21 st century
How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion


Many countries have voted to guarantee animal rights in their constitutions recently. More and more people would like to prevent animals from being hunted, tamed, or traded. They even demonstrate against keeping animals in captivity. But in my opinion, I do not agree to close all zoos in the world because of these following reasons.

First of all, zoos are very important to educate children, especially those who live in the city, about the habitats and diets of animals. For example, visiting the zoos can help children learn how tigers or lions roar and how lively they are. Young pupils can also feed herbivores by handing them grasses or sugarcanes. These significant actions are useful to build a good feeling about animals in the mind of children, who will be the boss of Earth in the future.

Secondary, it is wonderful to picnic in zoos because they are usually spacious and fresh with plenty of trees and flowers. Here fathers can teach their children about the necessity of animals, plants for our life, and mothers can prepare meals and make tents. In addition, we can take as many pictures together as we like. All family members will feel happier and closer after these relaxing activities.

Last but not least, zoos can be safe houses for endangered species in the red list. Rhinos, elegant sunbirds, pandas ...can be cross-bred by scientists. Moreover, the income from entrance tickets can support the protection of animal projects.

In conclusion, it is a good idea to respect animal rights but it would be over if we said there were no reason for zoos to exist in the 21st century.
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